K&C: What the Dickens?
ARCHIVED KUDOS & CRITIQUES
WRITTEN in DECEMBER 2004
This is what happens when insomnia strikes at 3 A.M.
Oh, dear! Oh, dear! What have we here? It’s a case of Christmas cheer, that’s clear.
Sleep deprivation sparks an influx of crazy ideas leading to
a wacky crossover of the Angelverse,
‘The Night Before Christmas’, and ‘Grandma Got Run Over by a Reindeer’.
What are your thoughts about ‘What the Dickens?‘ moment of insanity?
Kudos and Critiques are Appreciated.
OMG, that was hilarious, Lysa! I can’t believe some of the rhymes you managed.
This is my favorite:
Without having to ask him, Wes knew the old geezer
Would no doubt be the famed Mister Scrooge: Ebenezer.
I also liked this moment tremendously:
Should we open up her gifts,
or send them back?
Cordelia called out, Send them back?!
I’m still chuckling. Wonderful, wonderful holiday moment.
This was fabulous…I am still laughing.
Wishing you a very Merry Christmas, and may you find all you wish for underneath your tree this year.
Can’t wait for more of your stories!
lol. That was fantastic! Super creative.
Lol! That was very good, Lysa. And all of the rhyming! Near perfect, I’d say. I doubt I could have come up with most of them. Great Job!
Amazing, just amazing *shakes head in awe*.
Not only are you a brilliant writer, you’re also a hilarious poet. Who knew? Thanks for this treat and happy holidays.
This is fabulous! I’m so impressed at the rhymes you managed. Thank God for those 3 AM ideas, lol. I’m so happy your muse is back and in full strength. Can’t wait to read the rest of your yummy Christmas fics.
That was so funny, it was great! I read it last night and then spent the rest of the night thinking and speaking in rhyme, I did it all the time. And thank god for 3 am inspiration.
Lysa, my love, how good this is
You’ve left my brain all in a tiz
My hopes high, you said not to get
But honey, you needn’t have fret
A large grin is now sat on my face
At the rhyme’s most humorous pace
How can I thank you, I do ask
For the postage of this excellent task
I know, my voice does say
Two lines of feedback come your way
Simply yell congrats on a job well done
This was so much damn good fun!
Boo! Hey there, it’s me! Just popping in to say that this fic is positively genius and spectacular. I’ll definitely keep comin’ back to it, even when it’s not holiday-time!
Keep on writing!
I’m amazed by your abilities. What more can you do?? That was almost too much fun.
Absolutely fantastic.. I took the time to read every single word, they all had their importance. this was so cleverly done!
LOL! Lysa – that was fabulous. Loved it!
That was delightful, fun and truly amazing.
That was Spectacular!!!
Thank you for sharing it with us Lysa Here’s wishing Santa brings you everything you want for Xmas