K&C: Splintered

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Splintered


WRITING TEAM:  C/Aphrodisiac (Califi and Lysa)
A Beige!Angel Novel
Sleep deprivation and hallucinations make Cordelia the target of Angel’s obsessions.


AUTHOR’S NOTE:
The comment threads for ‘Splintered’ were not archived prior to forum closure. 😦

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MERCEDES64:

 

Hi Lysa,

I haven’t been around for awhile, but things aren’t as good as they should be for me right now. Anyway, I’ll be gone for a little bit starting Friday, but before I go, I wanted to leave you some real feedback, and get in as much stalking as possible. Here goes:

Splintered
You and Cali are C/A fanfic geniuses. Splintered was a wonderful fic from start to end. I know that you had the difficult task of writing the chapter in which Angel and Cordelia consummated their “relationship”, but you did a beautiful job. I felt Cordelia’s confusion, and while I wanted her to resist for her own safety, the romantic/smut addict in me wanted her to cave. I truly felt sorry for her when she and Angel thought that he lost his soul, and she was left to deal with the potential consequences of their actions.

You and Cali did a beautiful job with the conclusion of Splintered. Part of me hoped for the smutty “and they lived happily ever after” ending, but reading it, I knew it was perfect the way it was. I was telling Cali that the reason that I fell in love with C/A was because of the friendship the two shared. The hint of that that I glimpsed at the end of Splintered gave me hope that over time, they would find their happily ever after.


 

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